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Bro Apple's pulling a lot of pretty girls. Good for her! <3

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Unbelievably adorable. Melt my heart indeed, the writing and character expressions fit together fantastically.

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We love a gaggle of polyam GFs! I had a few issues where the text didn't really seem to make sense, or it started in a weird place without context which made the game hard to understand. Other than that, cute soundtrack, even cuter drawings and characters!

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just started but calling it now the monsters are humans (like irl)

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This game is so cute💙💙💙 This poly girlfriens are the best, and the illustrations make my hurt smile🥰🌻💙

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I can't express how much adorableness this game has. Great Job! 10/10

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Ahhh so cuteeee! The character art is lovely and the bgs too! The font was a bit big so it required a looot of clicking, specially on battles where they repeat the same stuff, so maybe thats a suggestion for improvement? overrall great, super sweet!

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GAY RIGHTS BABY 10/10

This is a cute little game, and I like the art and music a great deal.  "We must go out and defeat the monsters" and then smash cut to our heroine being a cyclops was a great gag, and the excuse plot works well.

My main issue is a technical one: unless it's a problem on my end, the font you've chosen just flat out clashes with the rest of the visual design.  Consider using a serif font like Garamond or any of these for a more storybook look.

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It's obvious that a lot of time and effort went into this visual novel. Good job!

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This is a really pleasant game! It’s very colorful and the character designs are adorable! I really like the ideas behind the battle system as well, I think it flows well with the visual novel aspects of the game. I do wish there was a way to skip/fast forward through dialogue you’ve read already during battles. Also, I did notice a few grammar and text overflow issues. Overall, it was a fun time! I didn’t complete the game as of writing this comment but I’m definitely going to go back to finish it up! I made a video with my commentary and experiences. Keep up the great work!